Task #7: Evaluations

Task 7-1 Evaluate your classmates' literary works

Section 1 (11:40am Class) --> Click here.

Section 2 (5:40pm Class) --> Click here.


Task 7-2 Evaluate the Katakana project

Evaluate the katakana project as one of the course assignments. Please write as much as possible so that we can improve our Japanese course for students who will be studying Japanese at Columbia.

Click here.


Task 7-3 Do the course evaluation


Go to CourseWorks, choose Elementary Japanese B, and then click Evaluation ("Evaluations assigned to students of this course").

Evaluate this Japanese course and the instructor. Please write as much as possible so that we can improve our Japanese course for students who will be studying Japanese at Columbia.

Due on Monday, December 10th for both sections.

Task #6:Create a Katakana Literary Work

Task#6: Create a literary work using katakana words or expressions, and then post it on your blog.

So far, we have analyzed katakana samples and learned about various usage of katakana. You're expected to make the most of what you have learned through the katakana project.

That being said, you're encouraged to create an original work using katakana in an interesting manner. Avoid using only loanwords (e.g., アルバイト), which are normally spelled in katakana, anyway.

Here are the instructions:

• Choose the type of your literary work (See the previous blog entry for examples). If you want to do 2 different types of literary works, you may create two pieces.
• If you choose to write either senryu or haiku, you need to write at least 3 of each. Read the previous blog entry about haiku and senryu and peruse the rules. 
• After you finished your literary work, write the rationale for your katakana usage like this. In other words, you need to explain why you used particular katakana words in your work and what effects you intended to convey.
•  Due on Monday, November 19 for both classes.

Just for the heads up on the next task, you will need to comment on your classmates' literacy works (at least 4~5 pieces).

Task #5: Katakana Literary Works Evaluation Categories

Task 5-1: Start brainstorming your literary work

In the next task, you will be asked to create your own literary work, using katakana words or expressions. Start brainstorming what sort of literacy work you want to create. 

Below are some examples from the last year's students.

Manga1   Manga2

Story1   Story 2

Poem1  Poem2

Advertisement 1   Advertisement 2


If you decide to create haiku or senryuu, read this post to learn about what they are.

Haiku1   Haiku2

Senryu1    Senryu2


Task 5-2: Below is a list of the last year's evaluation categories. If you have anything to add or to revise, write in the comment section of this blog by Wednesday, November 7.

Based on these evaluation categories, your literacy work will be evaluated by your instructor as well as your classmates.

Katakana Literary Works Evaluation Categories
1. Emotiveness (Appeal to heart)
Capture the readers, appeals to the senses, inspire reaction
Thought provoking, evoke emotion
Relatable to the reader

2. Delivering message (Message)
Eternal verities, providing lessons (underlying deeper messages), depth beyond the plot,

Has a point to it
Thought provoking content
Star-crossed romance, sense of fantasy (mythos)

3. Aesthetic Factors (Beauty)
Aesthetically pleasing,
Follows a structure, style, formation of a style and consistency
Provokes image, songs, and etc, can picture in your head
Sounds beautiful, should flow, have rhythm, rhythmical

4. Creativity (Interest)
Unique, exciting, interesting, fun, not boring, wit, smart, funny, humorous, entertaining, well developed, not repetitive/ cliché, sparking new ideas and questions, original, imaginative, innovative, original
challenging societal conventions, question the typical standards

5. Consideration for Others (Ease of Reading)
Coherent, clear, thoughtful, an appropriate length, concise, cohesive
Easy to interpret and/or understand
Ability to reach wide audiences across ages and cultural backgrounds, potentially carry universal values, Respect all cultures
Vocabulary that takes into account the audience's level of understanding

6. Language (Relation to Language)
Use of language, meaning either a unique use of diction perhaps
Well crafted (i.e.- put thought/effort into it, strategic choice of words, etc.)
Wordplay, fun with language, has an eloquent use of words, illustrative language

Use language that we’ve learned

Haiku & Senryu
Rhythms, rhymes, and catchy sounds, satiric, succinct
Correct form and style

Subtlety is appreciated to achieve mood or image
Express an aspect of human nature (Senryu)
Express an aspect of the natural world (Haiku)

Story & Manga
1) Plot & Structure
Good, interesting, clear story line, good artwork
Depth of character and plot
Beginning, middle, and end
2) Characters
Character development, characters that you can relate, memorable characters

Task 3&4: Comment and Revision

Task #3: You will read your classmates' analyses and make comments on them.

Does the analysis include the following contents?

1.  Choose at least 2 katakana words/expressions that you found and think about what kinds of effects / purposes there may be in these words/expressions writing in katakana instead of hiragana or kanji.
2.  Also, think why there are such effects/purposes.
3. Think about why each textbook is different in explaining katakana, and why the textbooks explained katakana in the manners that they did.

Do you agree/disagree with your classmates' analyses? Why or why not?

Provide questions, suggestions, and new perspectives, if any.

*Your comments are due on 10/18 (R) for 5:40-class; 10/22 (M) for 11:40-class.

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Task #4: Based on the feedback you received from your classmates and others, revise your Katakana analysis and post it as the final version. Instead of erasing the draft, add a new version to your blog. For the title, write "Katakana Analysis (Final)." Your final Katakana analysis will be graded by the instructor.

The final version of your Katakana analysis is due on 10/30 (T) for 5:40-class; 10/31 (W) for 11:40-class. (Deadlines extended)

Task 2: Katakana Analysis (Draft)

Think about katakana use and write your analysis on your blog. Follow the directions below.

(Other people will read your analysis and make comments on your analysis, later.)
You may write in English.

1. Choose at least 2 katakana words/expressions that you found and think about what kinds of effects / purposes there may be in these words/expressions writing in katakana instead of hiragana or kanji.
2. Also, think why there are such effects/purposes.
3. Think about why each textbook is different in explaining katakana, and why the textbooks explained katakana in the manners that they did.

* On your blog, post what you have written in the question above. For the title, write "Katakana Analysis Draft." (deadline: 10/9 (T) for 5:40- class; 10/10 (W) for 11:40- class)

Katakana Analysis Checklist

1. Did you clearly state the source(s) for your data (e.g., newspaper "Asayomi shinbun," women's magazine "Kitty")?
2. Did you gather enough information from varied sources to support your conclusion?
3. Were you able to exchange your opinion with people who knows Japanese (i.e., advanced level Japanese learners, a Japanese person)?
4. If you want to read about the Katakana project objectives and procedure, click here.

Task 1: Post your katakana samples on your blog.

Post your katakana samples on your own blog with their categories and comments/questions/explanations. Below are examples. You may write your comments in English if necessary. If possible, provide photos or links to the websites where you found the katakana.

キンッ：onomatopoeia
「ン」のあとに小(ちい)さい「ッ」がついているのって珍(めずら)しいですね。

チャット：loanword
でも日本語(にほんご)の「チャット」はオンラインチャットの意味(いみ)でつかわれているようです。chatting in personの場合(ばあい)は「おしゃべりする」といいます。

飛行機のチケット：loanword
昔(むかし)は飛行機(ひこうき)の切符(きっぷ)と言(い)っていたが、
今(いま)ではみんなチケット、もしくは航空券(こうくうけん)とよびます。
どうして「飛行機の切符」っていわなくなったんでしょうか？

おれが悪がったァー!!!! : emphasis  (?)
小さいカタカナの「ァ」がついています。どうして「ぁ」じゃないんでしょうか？

宇多田ヒカル：personal choice (?)
宇多田(うただ)さんの本名(ほんみょう)は「宇多田光」です。漢字(かんじ)で書(か)きます。でもどうして宇多田(うただ)さんは、芸名(げいめい)として「ヒカル」を選(えら)んだんでしょうか？漢字の「光」やひらがなの「ひかる」という選択肢(せんたくし)もあったはずです。

ケンタロウ: personal choice (?)
宇多田ヒカルとおなじ理由(りゆう)でカタカナにしたのでしょうか。

Vocabulary List
珍(めずら)しい: rare
意味(いみ): meaning
場合(ばあい): case
昔(むかし): past
選(えら)ぶ: to choose
本名(ほんみょう): real name
芸名(げいめい):   stage name
選択肢(せんたくし): choice
理由(りゆう): reason

クレーマー？

ハドソン川( がわ)で泳(およ)いでいる人を見(み)かけました。サインフェルドっていう番組(ばんぐみ)に出(で)てきたクレーマーでは？　クレーマーは昔(むかし)イーストリバーで泳いでましたね。

まあ、どっちにしろ、ハドソン川って泳ぐ所(ところ)じゃないですよね。どう見てもきれいな水(みず)じゃない。ひょっとしたらこの人、ものすごく暑(あつ)かったのかも。「暑い〜！もう我慢(がまん)できない。飛(と)び込(こ)んじゃえ！」みたいな。

単語（たんご）
サインフェルド  Seinfeld
番組(ばんぐみ) (TV) program
クレーマー Kramer
昔(むかし) in the past
どっちにしろ in any case; either way
もう我慢(がまん)できない I can't take it anymore.
飛(と)び込(こ)む  to dive into; to jump into

How to Open a Blog Account

In order to open a new blog account, please follow the instructions.

1. Go to http://www.blogger.com to create your blog.

• In order to receive comments from as many people as possible, please select "Settings," then "Comments," and choose either "Registered Users" or "Users with Google Accounts" under the "Who can comment?" section.

• If you want to know how to type Japanese, please click the side links under にほんごとコンピューター which can be found on the right side of the page.

2. Send your blog address (URL) to the instructor.

• If you have trouble opening a new account, please let the instructor know.

• If you already have a blog and you can use Japanese on it, you do not have to open a new account.

3. Post a blog entry regularly.

• If you have no idea about what to write, please see the following suggested topics.

I can read Japanese!

In speaking Japanese!

Reasons I am studying Japanese

My dream

My Japanese friends

Japanese grammar vs. English grammar

Speaking vs. Writing

Listening vs. Reading

My daily schedule

I have no time to study!

I spent so much time studying, but..

My hobbies

My classmates

What I like/dislike about Japan or Japanese

Daily news

Japanese writing system

Kanji

Japanese vocabulary

Favorite lab exercise

Voc quiz

My favorite Japanese TV show, movie, or anime

• You can also use pictures and videos!